The Door Opener

The Door Opener: An Evaluation

As the name aptly explains this is a door opening scene!  It consists of someone walking to a door opening and then walking through and closing it.  This piece flows relatively smoothly but i feel it is a little jumpy between Dylan getting to the door and the close-up of the door handle.  To improve this piece I would maybe and in an extra clip before the close-up as an stage between it the mid shot before to improve the flow of the whole piece.


Feedback and improvement:

The feedback I got on this is that Dylan went through the door in an overly complicated unnecessary way and that to improve this as director I should have got Dylan to do it again but in a simpler way, and if necessary demonstrated what i wanted him to do.